Quoting the article..."The element Beler/Balar is believed to refer to the Maia Ossë, who often dwelt at the shores of Balar."
What's an element in this case? There are a lot of web pages out there with the above in it, but no one defines themselves. I'm guessing that the word element is being used by a specialist
too much intro
This artile has too much intro. Save the intro for your thesis and a few well chosen sentences, not the whole article. Besides, how can I scribble all over your work if it's in the intro? I can edit anything but an intro (LOL)! Seriously, I would have suggested how to break the article up but I don't know how to edit an intro.